Tuesday, January 3, 2012

What do you think of my poem, by the way this does not reflect my life in any way!?

I thought it was good except for one thing. The ending. You basically just dropped the ending. If it was me, I would of kept the reader guessing or wondering at the end. Besides, the best way to help somebody or for somebody to help another is if you keep that person wondering, or thinking. Just my opinion though.

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